Goodbye’
‘Goodbye’
Just as she was going to enter the portal she ran back and kissed Caspian. After they kiss, they embraced each other for a long time. She went back in front of the portal and entered. When she entered she heard people calling her name.
‘Susan’
‘Susan’
‘Susan, wake up!’
‘What an amazing kiss’ she thought.
“Yes, you’ve been very occupied,” Peter dropped his voice “since we’ve been back from Narnia.
“I’m alright .Just a bit tired and hungry,” Susan lied.
“Well, okay if you say so,” Lucy replied.
Caspian is still looking at the portal. He hoped that Susan arrived safely. He can still smell Susan. The sweet, flowery smell of Susan. And he remembered the kiss. The wonderful kiss that Susan gave him.
“Yes, of course, sorry to keep you waiting.”
“Well, I am miserable.”
“Is it because of Queen Susan?
“How did you know that?”
“Everyone saw you and the Queen kiss. You love her.”
“Yes, very much. I miss her already”
“Everyone is going to miss them.”
“Let’s not talk about her please. You’re making me more miserable.”
And they rode in silence.
They arrived at boarding school. Susan was still acting like a zombie, in Edmund’s opinion, anyway. Susan was still thinking about Caspian. She wanted to be near him again. She never felt this way before and it’s driving her crazy. She went straight to the dormitory where no one is in there. She’s asking herself ‘How’s he doing? Is he alright? Is he in good health?’ When suddenly a hand grabbed her shoulder.
“Sorry”
“SORRY?? You almost gave me a heart attack!!!”
“I didn’t mean to, Susan. Please forgive me.”
“Oh alright. What do you want, Lu?
“Just wanna know if you’re thinking about Prince Caspian.”
“How did-“
“Please. It’s written all over your face!”
“I can’t stop thinking about him, Lu. And the kiss! What a sweet kiss! I never felt this way before Lu!! I want to be with him! I miss him already!”
“Well it may lessen your missing for Caspian. Open it.”
“Where’d you get this Lucy? It’s beautiful!”
“I’ll Remember You”

6 comments:
god! that was so cute and amazing! i almost cried at the end of it!!
then when i saw the movie, i actually did cry!!! omg im such a sissy!
:):(:-D
Ohh my god! it's such a beatiful story!!! I am writting something like this but...i don't know, it's not so good as this one.
I hate the ending because she leaves narnia and caspian seems so sad...but, there was something i loved...and it was the wat that he looked at her...he seemed to be so in love with Susan that made those moments so beatiful...
well it's a great story and I discovered it because of the video that another person made in youtube, wich was wonderful too.
sorry if i didn't talked so weel it's just that I don't speak english as a normal language jaja.
kisses
That was marvelous
I love Susan & Caspian & the way you portrayed them was so amazing that it made me wanna watch the movie again, I love Ben Barnes & I love your story, thank you for sharing
Thank you!!That made me cry!
Hi. (:
I come from poland an my english language [grammar] is horrible, but I read your story and I understand all. it's fantastic. (: I love Caspian and Susan. eh, I love 'Chronicles of the Narnia'... <3
Kamila. (:
awwww! If only Susan and Caspian could have been together! That was such a fantastic, but oh so sad ending! And your story too! I watched a video inspired by this story on youtube!
;( Loving each other and yet its not to be.
However in the 3rd Narnia, Caspian does smile at that blue star lady a lot.
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